10 Responses for "Wrote a freeverse…..rate/hate?"

1. selena gomez March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 1

   First off I would like to say Nexx is a complete idiot. I mean it's not that hard to figure out what those lines meant.9/10 for a freeverse.

2. taylor lautner March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 2

   Last line was whack and such, lol. The rest was good, but I lost you in this part:"Never went back to the past that’s bad that’sThe equivalent, sniffling, to all the flash backsAnd that’s that, rewind fallen angels and prophets"What are you trying to say there exactly?vvv Latj's a girl

3. lady gaga March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 3

   I too like to flow now and thengrow as I do into long wind, moltenlike lava rush, from the top of a mountain hushas the whisper that shivered winter began to splinterwarping both space and timethe temporal dimension came unwindtossed to chaosit maybe hard to graspnot first but for certainty not lastthe breadth of a boundless universethe lips that bear the sound of this cursenever too old to be sold for a solid pricetake my advicedo not neglect the flavor of formfrom whence is where a greater poet isborne

4. Vanessa Hudgens March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 4

   I think you're stuff is generally pretty good. Some of its meh to me, but most of its enjoyable. I would go to poetry slams and stuff, because no one here is going to tell you if you're wack, because ur a valued member of the section. It's like asking your mom to rate your macarooni picture.

5. taylor lautner March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 5

   HATE!Best answer please By the way i'm kidding. I'm not that much of a jerk, but I guess I am that much of a jerk since I still haven't read your poem.

6. miley cyrus March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 6

   Latj sucking up is how he's second highest contributer T.TThat was actually really sick, but are you sure that was a freestyle?

7. taylor lautner March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 7

   'while the truth remains like neo-soul pro'that's a great line…

8. miley cyrus March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 8

   Quit tryin to be tough, n1gga, you look like a @ssholenaw, kiddin homie, it's aight

9. taylor lautner March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 9

   That was dope!8.99/10

10. justin bieber March 14th, 2010 at 10:45 am 10

    First off you are very wrong in your last line because people do care about your rhyming, poetry and such. You are one of the most talented lyricists on this site and this is yet another example of why.You talk in "round about way" about things in your past that follow you in flash backs but that you can overcome it. You think your writing isn't flawless but every poet or writer thinks the same. I think that the last lines are about how you feel about mainstream vs. underground and your "battle" in your mind of the fear of making it big and how people may not respect you if you make it big and it goes gold and not underground and but mainstream. Be proud of what you do…don't worry about what category it falls into and just do it. You have a talent that is sent from God.9/1/10Happy 2010!!!