Whatdo you think of this story?
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14
Mar
Whatdo you think of this story?
A day in the portals of Heaven and Hell
Where am I? What am I doing here? These are the questions that were running through my head. All I could feel was this excruciating pain pounding on my head. Then all of a sudden everything went black, and the next thing I know I am standing in front of a large crowd of people. The first person to come up to me was a paragon of beauty, she had the biggest most enchanting green eyes I had ever seen, the longest gold colored hair, and skin so smooth it could put a babies bottom to shame. “Welcome to heaven, my name is Angela I’ m your guardian angel” she said. “Your relatives are here waiting for you”. Then one by one the large crowd of people came up to me and introduced themselves as relatives I had known who had passed. Most of them I had seen before, but some I had never met. A feeling of exuberance struck me like thunder, then the large crowd split into two in front of us they seemed like they wanted me and Angela to go through. Then the next thing I know Angela and I were standing in front of a pearl like gate, which I inferred were the gates of heaven. The gates opened up, for what I saw behind these gates was inexplicable. Behind the gates, all I could see was an immense amount of light that could blind any normal human, but strangely enough this light gave me an overwhelming sense of comfort and tranquility. “Wow” I thought “This is amazing” Until now, I had never felt so calm, peaceful, and exuberant “Soon you will hear music” Angela said. And soon enough the most mellifluous, enchanting, symphonious music started to play; however, I had no idea where it could be coming from. The music resonated in my ear like a sweet melody of love and passion. “Where is such music coming from” I asked Angela. “Look up there” she replied. I looked up to see other angels playing harps. The music became more and more dulcet, until they turned into approbations of God. These approbations, in my opinion, where unlike any you would hear in church; they were more heartfelt. Suddenly the lights disappeared and I found myself in a city, yet this city was unlike any I had ever been to. This city was majestic, angelic and divine. The sidewalks were made of gold, the buildings made of crystals, and the streets made of copper. Awestruck by heaven, I realized that Angela, who was my guardian angel, was no longer with me. I also contemplated that the turbulence and pain I had on earth had walked out of my body .The angels I had seen playing harps lifted me up into the air, so I was basically seeing heaven from above. This place was unlike earth because this place was pure no one committed inequities or betrayed their fellow man, everything here was immaculate. All of a sudden the angels dropped me, the music stopped, and everything went black. I woke up with fire surrounding me, for I knew I was in Hell. I felt like my heaven had been arrogated from me. A group of people with twisted and demonic visages came up to me saying “Come with us, Come with us”. There voices were equivalent to that of a cat being run over by a truck 8 times. They bit and punched me; the pain from this was stupendous. Hell was an odious place that exuded hate, fear, and anguish like a noxious perfume. Suddenly a feeling of strength came over me, and one by one I buffeted those feral creatures with my fists. “Get away from me you hot messes!!” I screeched. But it was not over yet, for more of these hideous people came over to me. “Come with us, Come with us” they yelped. I could not take it anymore this anguish seemed perpetual. “Help Me” I yelled with all I could muster. Then suddenly everything went black. I woke in a hospital bed with a group of doctors standing before me. Prior to this incident I had not believed in heaven or hell, but after experiencing both places I realized how fatuous I was being for having that mentality
2 Responses for "Whatdo you think of this story?"
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Lmfao, I'm not reading all that! XP
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