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15 Mar
What do you think of these lyrics I wrote? Please answer!?
If you have any tips or ideas, let me know
I don’t understand…
The way I still long, for the touch of your hand.
I’ve been hurt too many times before,
Said I was through,
But you keep coming back,
Knocking on my door…
And I let you in.
Well, I’m not gonna let you win again.
What happened to my confidence,
Why are you acting innocent,
When you’re the one that did this to me…
You’ve tried to play these games before,
But I can’t take it anymore…
What happened to my pride?
I’m starting to believe your lies…
And oh,
When did I become,
The insecure one?
You seemed so perfect,
That I was ashamed…
But who said that means you can beat me down?
I only have ONE name.
Beauty’s only skin deep, you didn’t pass the test.
It’s time for me to move on,
You never cared about the rest.
What happened to my confidence,
Why are you acting innocent,
When you’re the one that did this to me…
You’ve tried to play these games before,
But I can’t take it anymore…
What happened to my pride?
I’m starting to believe your lies…
And oh,
When did I become,
The insecure one?
I need time to find myself again,
You need to go,
I don’t wanna stay friends.
You tried to keep me under your spell,
All I have to say,
Is you can go to hell!
What happened to my confidence,
Why are you acting innocent,
When you’re the one that did this to me…
You’ve tried to play these games before,
But I can’t take it anymore…
What happened to my pride?
I’m starting to believe your lies…
And oh,
When did I become,
The insecure one?
6 Responses for "What do you think of these lyrics I wrote? Please answer!?"
Best Answer – Chosen by Voters the lyrics are brilliant! really emotionally charged! i think perhaps a rapped interlude would fit well in this song, perhaps after the 'go to hell!' bit, which is like the climax of the brooding anger throughout the song.maybe the rap lyrics would be something like this:'i don't need you any moreso walk out that door!why did you demonize?why did you need to terrorize?it all comes back in the end!one salad, one fries – all rise, you think that i'm surprised?-i knew about your lies cuz i could see em in your eyes.now there's NO MORE liesNO MORE jokes about my size,baby, you have to just walk out and leave.this you have to realize (x4)'you don't have to use this, but i think it would improve your song. anyway, great job!
great song. love it
only ONE name?? all the great singers have a nickname guess your not a great one…..
Sounds like a poem, but that's because I don't know the melody. Haha.Love it! So relatable
omg they are really good! i like them heaps
I like it.
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