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15 Mar
What do you think of these lyrics I wrote? Honest opinion!?
(Please don't say that you like it just to be voted best answer, say what you really think. lol)
If you have any tips or ideas, let me know
I don’t understand…
The way I still long, for the touch of your hand.
I’ve been hurt too many times before,
Said I was through,
But you keep coming back,
Knocking on my door…
And I let you in.
Well, I’m not gonna let you win again.
What happened to my confidence,
Why are you acting innocent,
When you’re the one that did this to me…
You’ve tried to play these games before,
But I can’t take it anymore…
What happened to my pride?
I’m starting to believe your lies…
And oh,
When did I become,
The insecure one?
You seemed so perfect,
That I was ashamed…
But who said that means you can beat me down?
I only have ONE name.
Beauty’s only skin deep, you didn’t pass the test.
It’s time for me to move on,
You never cared about the rest.
What happened to my confidence,
Why are you acting innocent,
When you’re the one that did this to me…
You’ve tried to play these games before,
But I can’t take it anymore…
What happened to my pride?
I’m starting to believe your lies…
And oh,
When did I become,
The insecure one?
I need time to find myself again,
You need to go,
I don’t wanna stay friends.
You tried to keep me under your spell,
All I have to say,
Is you can go to hell!
What happened to my confidence,
Why are you acting innocent,
When you’re the one that did this to me…
You’ve tried to play these games before,
But I can’t take it anymore…
What happened to my pride?
I’m starting to believe your lies…
And oh,
When did I become,
The insecure one?
7 Responses for "What do you think of these lyrics I wrote? Honest opinion!?"
i love the lyrics, the words go deep and have so much meaning and make so much sense…you can feel the 'passion' for your work…i like 'em… A LOT!! lol
I like it I really don't think that you should change anything it almost sounds like a poem
thats pretty good!the only part i would change is the second verse…its a little hard to understandbut i really like the chorus
i love the song … wayyyyyyy better than some songs i have heard !!!
Oh.My.God. on a scale of 1-10 a 1000. i love them! if only i thought of them! you are awesome!
Really good acuatlly, only thing i would change is the part where it's like "and oh, when did i become, the insecure one?" because it doesnt make lots of sense but the rest is very good!
I like them, and usually I believe love songs are a bit cliché. Now maybe you should copyright those lyrics before posting them on the internet, people steal anything nowadays.
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