The other night i couldn't get to sleep so i decided to write a bit of poetry sort of thing. I'm not sure whether it would count as poetry or whatever, but i would appreciate it if you could all tell me your opinions on it.

Their eyes stared at me for some time. Trying to get back to my original activity was like trying to find a needle in a haystack- nearly impossible.
For some time I looked at them. Their eyes were a glowing read, something I had never seen before.
The colour reminded me of the view of a sunset, that ‘Wow!’ popping into you head the moment you see it.
They swiftly walked towards me, looking as though they were walking to meet a friend they hadn’t seen in any recent time.
They stood in a line. All 8 of them made my heart & lungs burn with their breath taking beauty.
I didn’t know what to do – or say. If I spoke what would I say? If I moved my rigid body to greet them, how would they react? It was like walking through a maze that was never ending.
Suddenly, all 8 of the beautiful creatures sprinted towards me. It took me so long to realise that was happened that that’s when I woke up. My voice ready to scream.
I sat on my bed, in my warm room overlooking the sunrise, trying to shake back to reality.
The creatures.
Who were they?
I never got any chance to do anything to help or solve my dilemma.
But one day, I will find out who they are!
I feel like my life cannot go on without knowing who they are. Like a car not being able to travel without fuel.
My life was useless.

Heres another aswell:

No animals, no people.
No wind, no buildings.
I stood lonely. By myself.
The atmosphere around me was uncomfortable & unfriendly.
It felt as though something was about to jump out to me, very suddenly.
I stood on the dark, hard ground beneath me.
My legs starting to tremble, then being joined by my arms & hands.
The sun beat down heavy on my skin, burning it every second.
I didn’t know where to go, or what to do.
There was no one to ask, no sigh posts to tell me. No phones or directions to the nearest city that was alive.
I stood motionless, in the middle of no where.
Waiting.
But never knowing what to wait for.

I have got some more peices if you would like to here them. I might put them up later.
Thanks. =)