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Tell me what you like of my lyrics!?

Okay so i wrote a song a long time ago and i just found and am wondering if it is any good. Please give me honest answers. :) Thanks.

(verse1)How long has this been going on?
Now her eyes seem so withdrawn
It continues to take over her she maintains and innocent demure

She hasn't noticed anything at all
She makes herself seem so small
How is it that she can hide the pain?
The answer no words can explain

Ahh…What is this thing?
Ahh…It's clawing at the inside of me

(chorus) Tell me when this all began
It's been hiding underneath her skin
Spreading around like a contagious disease
She shows a smile. Is is as dangerous as it seems?
I feel a light shining through my soul
A kind of light that just might make her whole
Inside of her a different beauty dawns
It just keeps going on and on and on.

(verse2) I can see it pulsing through her veins
It's on here toungue, she's fighting to restrain
I can tell it's boiling in her blood
I can tell it's only just begun

I need to know whats going through her mind
A tangled mess now starting to unwind
Is there a way that I can help her now?
If there is please tell me how

Ahh…what is this thing?
Ahh…what does it mean?

(chorus)

(bridge)For better or for worse
I feel remorse
This odd assault
No it's not my fault
Please tell me why
This could be goodbye

(chorus)