Take a look at my characters for my story what do you think….?
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Mar
Take a look at my characters for my story what do you think….?
Morpheus (Mercury) – This somewhat tall and strongly-built young man is very wise for his age. He is very expressive when it comes to certain things. He pictures himself as a leader and is heroic. He can always prove his point and sometimes in a bad way. He is quick to judge anyone. He is sometimes be misled by his quick-thinking and narrow-minded attitude and emotions. He is very determined to do what he is set out to do. He carries a bit of anger when things go wrong. He has a feud with his twin brother, Tye. He has short, curly and thick raven-black hair. His eyes are a heavy dark-blue and sometimes seem black in some lighting. His skin is an olive color. He has a goatee that is rough and thin. His abilities are shape-shifting and superior strength. His weapon is a blade that has been past down from king to oldest son for generations. This blade is long and has jewels engraved on the grip. There is also a crowned seal on the bottom of the blade.
Victoria (Venus) – Victoria is a beautiful and powerful woman. She is very caring and loving. She is values the importance of friendship. She enjoys the pleasures of life. She is also very strong-willed. She loves the work of arts. She is very zealous in her affections, she also very fanatical. Her pure beauty sometimes masks her strength. She is sometimes self-centered, superficial. She can also be very violent at times. Her mystical deep-honey brown eyes show deep emotion. She is of medium height. Her skin is soft and light. She has short light-black hair. Her abilities are flying, force fields, and healing or making the health of one’s opponent worse. Here weapon is a bow and arrow.
Marcus (Mars) – Marcus the hothead and fierce person he is can sometimes shadow his tender heart. He is always courageous and loves a good fight. He admires the feeling of adventures. Now he is also has a very short fuse and can explode at anytime. He is very narrow-minded and impatient. He also very bashful and carries harsh words. He can sometimes be driven by rage. He has frequent arguments with his brothers and sisters; the only person that can calm him is the Dragon Keeper, Aaron. He is bald, and has fiery-orange facial hair. His eyes are and orange-enriched hazel. His has the ability to control fire. His weapon is a sword that was given to him by Aaron. Aaron made this sword out of scales of a former dragon he kept. On his sword there is symbol of a dragon on the grip.
Julip (Jupiter) – Julip is a tall young woman. Her hair is auburn brown, thick and long. Her eyes are big and green. Her skin is clear and is light honey color. Her cheeks have few freckles. She has a reddish mark on her right foot that looks like the root of a tree. She is graceful, optimistic and free-spirited. Sometimes she can be optimistic at the wrong time. She can be very frivolous at times. She is careless. She loves to be happy. She doesn’t like to be tied down all the time. Her heart is pure. She can be clumsy at times. When her strength and power is needed most she will come through. Her abilities are the power to control earth. Her weapon is a wooden tube that is long and has to sharp steal blades at both ends. They appear to look like leaves. In the center of the staff there is a circle that surrounds a tree.
Sam (Saturn) – Sam is medium in height and has a slim body, but has muscular features. He has very close but frolicking yellow blonde hair. His eyes are small and light green. His nose has length and is thin. He has great shaped ears, but they have a point to it. He is a very determined young man. He desires to go above limitations even if his not ready to go that high. He can easily find moments of laughter. His emotions are sometimes reserved. He is always tries to prove himself to others. He feels that he is misunderstood. His powers are the control of lightning, electricity, and he can control his speed and the speed of others.
3 Responses for "Take a look at my characters for my story what do you think….?"
Best Answer – Chosen by Voters Sounds like you based your descriptions more on astrology than on mythology. There's nothing bad about the description, you can make it anything you want, but I would suggest, since you keep with the traditional meaning of the mythological figures (and arguably astrological meaning), I would make Julip the leader instead of Morpheus. Jupiter was, after all, the God of Gods. Jupiter was the Roman equivalent of Zeus, and we all know who Zeus is don't we?And you could make Sam (Saturn) a bit moore gloomy. Suits him better. Or portray him as a timekeeper of sorts.
Come up with a name other than Morpheus, since Morpheus was a god himself.
Morpheus (Mercury) – This somewhat tall and strongly-built young man is very wise for his age. He is very expressive when it comes to certain things. He pictures himself as a leader and is heroic. He can always prove his point and sometimes in a bad way. He is quick to judge anyone. He is sometimes be misled by his quick-thinking and narrow-minded attitude and emotions. He is very determined to do what he is set out to do. He carries a bit of anger when things go wrong. He has a feud with his twin brother, Tye. He has short, curly and thick raven-black hair. His eyes are a heavy dark-blue and sometimes seem black in some lighting. His skin is an olive color. He has a goatee that is rough and thin. His abilities are shape-shifting and superior strength. His weapon is a blade that has been past down from king to oldest son for generations. This blade is long and has jewels engraved on the grip. There is also a crowned seal on the bottom of the blade.
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