To me this poem doesn't seem right but I don't know how to fix it. The problem is probably because I wrote the last two lines first, so they don't really link into the rest of it. If you have any suggestions, they would be much appreciated.

Night dawned
All light began to fade
The once bold color
Now faint and shaded with grey

Starts began to fill the sky
So gracious, like a million other worlds
The soft green grass so welcoming
They lay together and witnessed the beauty

His eyes glistened with fiery passion
Reflecting the full moon, they shone
Through his eyes his soul was reveled
No details shielded, they were bare and unprotected

She lay, curiously
Loosing herself in his eyes
Searching his soul
And giving up hers in return, with no hesitation

His rough hands
Soothing against her ice-cold skin
She kissed his hand
And felt his warmth send shivers through her body

The two walked off into the night
And there where the ocean met the sky
They disappeared into the heavens
But they would live on
He as god
And her, his beautiful anger