3 Responses for "Rate my poem!!! On scale of 1-10+comments?"

1. justin bieber March 15th, 2010 at 10:07 pm 1

   i found it redundant and tedious to readand gave up for the most partI "skimmed"it lacked real feellike it was forcedhope this gives you a good perspective ~~~~~~~~~~~~here is a poem I wrote on "Beauty"~~~~~~~~~~beauty is the quiescent catalyst of any concluded reasoning~~~perfection, is that which, dream paints~~~~In sleep, all things are possible~~~~~know that touch strokes the sensesbrush of a stranger breath of a lover ~~~~Beauties sword carvesAway all ugly madnessAs you balance on the edgeOf her razor thin smile Source(s): poet

2. lady gaga March 15th, 2010 at 10:07 pm 2

   6- good. but remember that punctuation in a poem is used to separate different thoughts, and when reading a poem you read the entire though before pausing.

3. selena gomez March 15th, 2010 at 10:07 pm 3

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