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its about racism in america
its rap

We all shed the same color blood, breathe the same air
we all live on this earth, but the differance is that i care
so why cant you muthaf*ckers realize we all equal
no matter the color of your skin, we all still people
our diferences should bring us together, not set us apart
but cats have never been able to get along from the start
how can you be better than me for something i can't even controll
can't you see this hate is just taking it's toll
You want us to cure racisms effects
but you refuse to adknowledge your part in it's affects
and when you only cure the result you mask it
which means you mask the problems that we face everyday
whether black or gay, Chicano or phillipino
we all have pain in our pasts, but alast, the turmoil isn't past
as long as we deny our problems our pain will last

help me wth a chorus for this, or at least a name for this son