The intoxicating drink glistened in her chalice. I leaned forward to its bewitching power, it's aroma made me go into a trance. I glanced up at Melantha as she offered me the violet wine, and I couldn’t look away.
Her inhuman beauty mesmerized me and eliminated my common sense. The wings on her back fluttered with pure desire. Melantha’s eyes swirled with vivid reds, oranges and yellows, like they contained the fire within her.
“Drink, my love.” The Faerie whispered into my ear. I nodded, unable to look away. She lifted the goblet to my lips and her hot breath spread over me. Something close to a purr rolled out of my mouth, as my eyes turned back into my head. A laugh erupted from her lips. Melantha knew the power he held over me, and she used it to her full advantage.
Once again, she became serious. “Come now.” How hasty she was should have made me worry, but I was drunk just from being in the presence of Melantha, hence not thinking clearly.
She tilted the drink so that it spilled into my mouth, making my taste buds come alive from utter bliss. The luscious perfume rose as I took the chalice and the drink slithered down my throat all too easily.
After I had indulged in every last drop, I looked back to Melantha. She giggled, again, and murmured almost so low that I couldn’t hear it. “Caleb,” She curled a strand of my hair around her petite finger. “You are mine now.”
I was just about to protest, when I unwillingly nodded. “Good.” She sounded pleased with herself.
She rested her hand on my cheek and a gasp escaped my lips. Melantha’s hands were blazing as her left cupped my face, too. The surprise of her hot touch made me drop the chalice.
The warmth radiated off Melantha's now slightly glowing skin, it was almost shining red from her pores.
Melantha’s lips were suddenly on mine, parting softly. Her lips burned so much that it wouldn’t have surprised me if they caught on fire.
“Dear, you must rest.” Pushing me backwards onto the vibrant purple cushions, Melantha firmly pressed her hand against my chest.
Until I fell into a dreamless sleep, the Faerie sung over and over in her enchanting voice, “little one sleep now, in the morning you will bow. You will glow with such grace, your wings will make you hard to chase.” Before the darkness swallowed me, I thought I heard her voice actually echo.

The next morning I was still lying back on the velvet cushions. A different feeling surged through me, strength. Melantha was beside me, awake and smiling intently.
“I thought your eyes were going to stay shut forever. You’re much more beautiful now, in my opinion. Not that you weren’t gorgeous before, but you’re just so stunning.” Her hand stroked my hair as if I was her pet.
“Melantha, what are you talking about?” My voice came ou rugged.
She chuckled. “Oh, I forgot. You’re oblivious to what you are, aren’t you? How silly of me." As if she was thinking, she paused. “Come.” Melantha clutched my wrist, sending heat through my body. “Close your eyes, my love.” Without a word, I did as she ordered.
Melantha led me through the room, over and around the things that rested on the floor. She stopped me and with force and twisted me so that I was facing a certain way.
Melantha murmured, “Open, young one.” And she pecked my cheek.
My eyes shot open, and what was standing in front of me was a Faerie. The Faerie had jet black hair that swept to the side, sun-kissed skin and a pair of wings that had crimson and golden swirls that spiraled onto his bare back. The Faerie was me.
My unknown reflection made me gape. “Melantha,” With satisfaction practicly twinkling in her eyes, she nodded “What have you done?”
“Aren’t you pleased, my love?” Gloominess muffled her expression, but I knew it was all a show.
“Melantha, you’ve turned me into a Faerie!” I tried to sound as outraged as I could.
She looked truly taken aback, “Young one, didn’t you know? Never drink with Faeries.”
“What did you give me, Melantha?” I spat through exposed teeth.
"Dear, that's really irrelivent. We're together now.” She was expressionless.
Tears welled in my eyes, “Why me? I was just an ordinary human, petty enough to fall for your tricks, your good looks.”
“Faeries are supposed to be beautiful, and you were perfect, you are perfect.” She wrapped her arms around my waist and whispered, “My Caleb.”

I asked this question a while ago, but I'd like some more opinions on a few different questions.

1. What traits do you get from these characters?
2. Is it too fast paced?
3. Are you a Fantasy fan?
4. Did you enjoy it?
5. Did this compel you to read more?
6. Overall, what did you think?
7. Do you have any suggestions (including if you find mistakes)?

Thanks in advance ;D

~Nicole.xx