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26 Mar
Poll: are these good descriptions?
Radianlty and perfectly, his skin glowed like a sun gleaming, and i couldn't help but stare at his perfectly clear skin.
Her curly locks framing her flawless face rapidly bounced as she strutted down the concrete side walk.
Describing
Her flawless olive skin accentuated her pecan shaped hazel eyes. Long curly locks of dark brown hair hung loose down her back , grazing her tailbone. And it was something about her full lusious lips that just phased me.
His slightly tanned skin blended with his sandy blond hair. Loose strands of hair perfectly framed his oval shaped head. Wide green eyes brought out his natrual beauty, and i couldn't help but stare. His thick light eyebrows showed content, but friendly at the same time. He was truly the man of my dreams
It is describing a handsome man. and a beautiful woman.
im in 7th grade and grammar, and adjectives had to be concealed in my brain
so tell me what you think
3 Responses for "Poll: are these good descriptions?"
yes it was good but u kept repeating …i couldnt help but stare…u focused too much on that…but for a seventh grader that wasnt bad at all…good job!!!
I would just change the first sentence a little to something like, "Radiantly and perfectly, his skin glowed like the gleaming twilight and it took every breath within me not to stare at his undenying beauty."The rest is nice.
Yes but I would prefer the tall , dark , muscular and handsome description on the man
Source(s): Just saying =)
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