Poll: are these good descriptions?

Sentences

Radianlty and perfectly, his skin glowed like a sun gleaming, and i couldn't help but stare at his perfectly clear skin.

Her curly locks framing her flawless face rapidly bounced as she strutted down the concrete side walk.

Describing

Her flawless olive skin accentuated her pecan shaped hazel eyes. Long curly locks of dark brown hair hung loose down her back , grazing her tailbone. And it was something about her full lusious lips that just phased me.

His slightly tanned skin blended with his sandy blond hair. Loose strands of hair perfectly framed his oval shaped head. Wide green eyes brought out his natrual beauty, and i couldn't help but stare. His thick light eyebrows showed content, but friendly at the same time. He was truly the man of my dreams

It is describing a handsome man. and a beautiful woman.
im in 7th grade and grammar, and adjectives had to be concealed in my brain :) so tell me what you think :)