Poem i wrote…positive criticism welcome?

id just like to say its effin good to be back on Y!A i haven't been on in a long *** time but ive missed yall especially in this section lol. Anyway, I wrote a poem a few weeks ago while lets face it I was stoned and I was thinking about this woman I really like and it just flowed out. I thought it sounded amazing when I was stoned lol and even now sober I think its decent.

Positive criticism always welcome, negative insulting bullshyt gets reported…but anyway lemme know what u think

how can i resist you?
such a beautiful creature,
standing within my grasp,
still beyond full reach.

how can i resist you?
smiling face dancing in heavens reflection,
clouds underneath your feet,
lips tender as sunshine.

how can i resist you?
pale moon light skin,
ivory beauty with no discretion,
thinking about her almost becomes sin.

how can i resist you?
saddened sapphire blue eyes,
screaming to be loved to be held,
yet trapped in an unforgettable demise.

how can i resist you?
my love of damnation,
how could i have known,
that id give into temptation.