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26 Mar
Poem i wrote…positive criticism welcome?
Positive criticism always welcome, negative insulting bullshyt gets reported…but anyway lemme know what u think
how can i resist you?
such a beautiful creature,
standing within my grasp,
still beyond full reach.
how can i resist you?
smiling face dancing in heavens reflection,
clouds underneath your feet,
lips tender as sunshine.
how can i resist you?
pale moon light skin,
ivory beauty with no discretion,
thinking about her almost becomes sin.
how can i resist you?
saddened sapphire blue eyes,
screaming to be loved to be held,
yet trapped in an unforgettable demise.
how can i resist you?
my love of damnation,
how could i have known,
that id give into temptation.
2 Responses for "poem i wrote…positive criticism welcome?"
Aww, well hope you get her!Great poem in general.Talk to you soon.
=) welcome back whoever you areits so sweet, its like exacty what your feeling isn't it?the best poems come from the heart.
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