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26 Mar
Poem for my girlfriend, opinions please? ANYONE
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Opinions would be greatly appreciated, Thank you
Title:
My Heart Belongs to you
Poem:
…with your beauty, where do I begin?
You are the most beautiful thing that I’ve ever seen,
Your bright glowing eyes, like stars fallen from the sky,
Your perfect soft skin, when I snuggle up to you, It’s the cuddliest thing,
Your adorable tiny nose and soft silk hair, All the other girls say “it’s not fair”,
I don’t know how you are so beautiful,
You’ve caught my heart,
But I’ve known all of this right from the start,
Since the first time I laid my eyes on you,
Now were together my dreams have come true,
You’re the love of my life,
And some day, I want to make you my wife,
Jasmine you are my everything,
And for you I would do or give anything,
And if anyone said anything different I would have to disagree,
I’d give you my last breath just to see you breathe,
I’d give my last drop of blood to keep you alive,
I would jump in front of a bullet for you to survive,
You are what makes my word turn round,
And I hate to see you frown,
You and me, we are meant to be,
And I know sometimes we get angry and we disagree,
But you have to know that that isn’t the real me,
Even though we argue and fight,
You’re the only one I’d want by my side,
And sometimes when things get tough,
I feel that I am not enough,
And you do deserve so much more,
But you are the one that I adore,
So I am grateful to have your heart,
I would hate for us ever to be apart,
You are so special to me,
This is the way things are meant to be,
Two hearts together, for eternity <3
Thanks
8 Responses for "poem for my girlfriend, opinions please? ANYONE :D?"
Best Answer – Chosen by Voters this is your first one? not bad at all. it seems like something you would want to read to her rather than give to her, but overall, not bad for a first time.
AWW that is so cute! if my boyfriend gave me that poem i would love it, but if you Truly think these things about her and it is all true i think u should defiantly give it to her.
IF you have a normal girlfriend, then she will like it. C'mon you wrote it yourself, so she will and must like it.
Very nice. Abit soppy for my tastes and I can't work out the rhythm of it though but good nonetheless. Good luck. Hope she likes it.
i thinks its sweet. Everything girl would want to hear. She' love it. ?
Yea its good girls love thisa kinda )rap
dude the line making u my wife in not good…..else very nice keep it up
It's a very beautiful poem and I truly mean that.However even if it weren't as good as it is, she would still appreciate it because it comes from your heart. In life that is what matters the most. It is very much like Mother Teresa said.There are no great deeds, only small deeds with great love…Lovely poem.I'm sure she'll love it!!!
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