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26 Mar
Please Read and Comment on my Twilight Poem?
Please no rude comments, only constructive criticism please (it's a poem for Twilight)
Bella’s Protector
How lovely is your innocence, my sweet Angel
I shall not take that away
But, if you should ask me why
This I would tell you, with truth and despair
I am not like others, don’t you see.
My skin is marble, my body like concrete
I am filled with venimous poison
I dare not touch your fragile skin
Fore if I do you would surely die
Oh how I wish this wasn’t so
Your beauty is undeniable
So mesmerizing that it feels like
Heaven when you’re near.
Your essence pure like a moonlit night
It radiates off of your soul
I cannot live without you my love
But I shall not take the chance
My love is selfish this I cannot deny
But, I must be the strong one, for your sake alone
Remember this one thing, my Bella
I cannot promise my love to you, but I will
Always be your protector
4 Responses for "Please Read and Comment on my Twilight Poem?"
Best Answer – Chosen by Voters this poem is awesome.
Wow. Wow. Wow. WOW.That was amazing!!!!!!!! That is most definitely my new fav poem.Keep writing!! I would love to hear more of your poems. Even the old ones. That sounded like it came right out of Edward's mouth!One more comment…WOW.
That was a brilliant poem. Seriously, I imagined Edward reading it!
It is very sweet.
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