Please help me with the poem, please!!!?

Author: admin

26 Mar

This is called Beauty is…..

Beauty is…
Beauty is the sun on your skin
The wind in your hair
It is the whisper you hear
While lying in the grass

Beauty is the rusty old pick-up
With an old stereo
Singing as loud as possible
Not caring who hears

Beauty is dancing in the rain
With your best shoes on
Knowing what your mom will say
But doing it anyways

Beauty is watching the sunrise
Through the open window
And coming home after a long day
And watching the sunset into another chance

Beauty is when everything is messed up
You keep pushing forward
Because you know how to win against life
You just haven’t tried

Beauty is the sun on your skin
The wind in your hair
The whisper you hear
Saying you’re safe now

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justin bieber March 26th, 2010 at 5:14 am 1
Best Answer – Chosen by Voters I like it. I'm not a poetry-loving person, but I'm finding poetry on Yahoo answers which I do like.My only critical thought is that "beauty" might not be the best word. Perhaps you could find a better word. I dunno, maybe "contentment," or something like that.Keep up the good work. I don't know much about poetry, but it seems to me that you have talent.
taylor swift March 26th, 2010 at 5:14 am 2
wow its…beautiful=) as a fellow poet, i say you used wonderful sensory language. i could feel the hot blazing sun on the back of my legs, the rusty pick-up, the exhilarating feeling of rain drops descending upon my face, seeping through my shoes. very good=)
selena gomez March 26th, 2010 at 5:14 am 3
the 5th stanza should say: Beauty is when nothing is perfect But you keep pushing forward You don't know how to win against life No matter how hard you have triedi think overall its good but i hope this helps

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