Please critique this poem?

She floats upon the crystal blue water
The current gently licks her auburn skin
Her dark, sleek hair falls upon her breast
The essence of beauty radiates from her
All the warmth and love of the world finds shelter in her eyes
She moves her lips
Attempts to speak but no words are heard
The subtle rush of the water sings its song

Suddenly the current goes mute
Her eyes widen and glass over
A lonely tear mopes hopelessly down her cheek
You watch her say “I love you”
But still cannot hear the perfection of her voice

Silence

No heart could remain un-phased after seeing the look upon her face

Pure confusion

The most severe pain inflicted upon the most undeserving victim
The water violently grabs her, she is gone
The opaque surface provides a window
A blurred showcase of her flailing efforts
She emerges with a shriek
Her voice now unshackled
The epitome of fear and heart break incarnate
The water remains deadly silent
Only her screams are heard

You run for her not but gain no ground
You watch her
You watch her fight for her life
She watches you
She watches you change your mind too late
She disappears
You reach the water and dive
The fatal current loses strength as you swim

She floats upon the crystal blue water
Her cold dead eye lids lock away all the warmth and love of the world
All is lost
Why weren’t you there?
All of the beauty and light in the world has died
Why weren’t you there?
The pain that you deserve to feel for the remainder of your days is utterly undesribale
Why weren’t you there?
Why weren’t you there?