No matter the circumstance, will you remember this?
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26
Mar
No matter the circumstance, will you remember this?
There is an unseen beauty
in the charcoal gray of a morning mist
that is so pure, this beauty,
so deeply embedded into the throat of time
that we have no choice but to keep it within us, as we would
our first morning's breath,
our last evening's blink of slow and merciful eyes
our mother's own skin, from womb to realm
and we cannot rid ourselves of it,
this beauty,
no matter the red rain at midnight
the black air at our lips
the shuddering of infants abandoned
in a ditch,
no matter, these,
for this beauty
is felt and not heard
kept and not stolen
eternal and not
tragic,
revolutionary
and not returned.
31 Responses for "No matter the circumstance, will you remember this?"
I don't often cry when I read a write on here.But, just now, I did.This is a sermon that should be spoken from a pulpit.To which I would shout, "Amen."Man, this is BEAUTIFUL.ma Source(s): Karebear, why, yes, he is! Here's a link to his book:http://www.lulu0o0com/content/pape...
I read this, and then read the responses. Lano points out some interesting ideas for a re-write…re-reading how you have displayed this masterpiece,I would have to say, leave it as is.Beautiful unseen glorythat gray morning mist.Yes,I will remembernice
That is one of the reasons I like to get up at the buttcrack of dawn, to see these things you describe, while sipping a nice,stong cuppa joesunsets amaze me too; total beauty, especially the ones I remember from living in the Caribbean
Good morning, Buk! I've read this several times now and each time it becomes more profound to me. God's beauty is always there…we just have to open our eyes and see beyond the evil in the world. Fabulous writing. I think it is my new favorite. Source(s): your friend, shirley
For the sake of your cavernous belly button, into which I could stuff the whole of my knowledge, three lawnchairs, two turkey sandwiches and a partridge in a… Uh….., here's a star!I may just have had a small stroke? Or this one really creeped me out.
Wow. It's the type of thing you read twice and think 'I wish I'd written this'.It's the writers. We wage our own war. (If, at times, only against ourselves)Are you published? If so… point me towards your collections. I'd love to read more.Cheers.
unseen, I will try to remember you may have just written the perfect country and western song….wait, I meanre-reading, and again
Yes Buk, I will remember it. It is sheer beauty. Thank you. Being a lover of rhyme I also enjoyed Iano's version. You have put a new meaning into free verse for me and I thank you for that
I don't even have to read it to say no. I'm drunk and high, so yeah ah I don't think so. At least not in my conscience memory. Although it is thought provoking and poignant.
Thanks for sharing. Not my favorite. I think it needs to be condensed. But remember, filter my opinion through the fact that I am a hack.
I always do… it's what keeps me sane. Knowing that beauty is there, and that it transcends all ugliness is a comfort indeed. Excellent write, thanks for sharing.. PEace!
You write like Palladio designed. Source(s): Stones in my Square.
We need to hold onto the things that can never be changed in this ever-changing world. That was great.
Yes I will remember and I will always remember those who showed the way to see it
It's a wonder we get anything done with all the crosses we dragit's the price we pay for being human
Bloody beautiful.
Fascinating…
Amazing!
Some people can really write. Congratulations.
"revolutionaryand not returned…"makes me wonder………….why… Source(s): nice piece…….
At my age, I will remember it until I forget.I wish all the free versers had your understanding.
Amazing as always…thanks for sharing.
I will remember Buk.
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No matter what the circumference, will you remember this?<hehe><sowwy, p&s rubs off on me>
That's a lovely poem.
Amazing!i loved it and totally agree with Ma!
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i love it.
Good stuff Buk.. i am in an agreement with Ma..
awww..sad *sigh* cryptic to me but great !!!
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