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15 Mar
Is this writing indicative of madness? Am I hopeless?
Charles: Let us go to bed – for I am weary and need sleep and your body close to mine is the only thing that gives me good rest.
Deborah (to herself): So we'll sleep until morning if the night permits,
if Winter does not penetrate the sheets we share
with cold immuring. But that does not mean
that I will love you when the day breaks.
The sun's light can be raw, sometimes,
and when it breaks upon my eyes and penetrates
through my skin, it may boil and confuse
the things inside me, confound them to patterns new.
Should I be blamed for this? Nature and I -
we have a pact of sorts. I flow and ebb according,
sometimes, to her wishes and vaunts of fancy.
I am tractable, pliant; my days are as lifetimes.
The beauty of my body (if beauty indeed there be)
and the love in my heart (if such passions can so be called)
abides here awhile with you – but the night drones
letting rest what was past, cooling the earth
upon which tomorrow lights fires anew.
5 Responses for "Is this writing indicative of madness? Am I hopeless?"
The two verses are leading … With a sense of intent for one to keep reading …It may be interesting in how Charles responds, (in thoughts to himself, oh so he thinks) Narratively The madness is not always the passion that arises,but of the senses involved and surroundings that create a path to ink-lings, This warmth, compelling as it may be, is tired from the day long journey,to only breathe with silence onto dawn as will advises,..
Sweet and not-bad-at-all shot at the stratospheric soaring of Shakepearean lyricism and romance. A pretty fledgling bird then. Young flight may be less than perfection, but still inspires us from the inside out. Notable, and quite an accomplishment — both emotionally and technically.
wow this is very good writing i am throughly impressed. I dont think this is madness this is great! you've got alot of hope
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It's not bad…there's no indication of madness in it at all. I mean, it's a dead style; nobody wants another Shakespeare poem; but it's not bad for what it is. Although how do you pronounce parentheses?
Absolutely beautiful writing. I'm blown away. It does not show any sign of 'madness', but rather an examined look at intimacy. Again, beautiful…
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