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14 Mar
Is this too offensive?
A soul so pure, a mind so young,
Secrets and lies, the story unsung,
A mother figure walks away,
Invite the confusion, let it stay,
Grow on your own, never understand,
There’s no protection, no helping hand,
Exhale your breath, then suck it in,
Accept the rejection, let it crawl through your skin,
Are her tears of sadness, or of pure guilt,
Your respect for her, till this day does wilt,
Close your eyes, imagine the past,
These feelings of resentment, surely won’t last,
The more you think, the more you care,
But to see her hurt, you cannot bare,
She doesn’t know, when you’ve had a hard day,
When you mind is full of hatred, sadness and grey,
As you grow older, the more about life you learn,
These feelings grow stronger, continue to burn,
Still as an you can’t figure her out,
These thoughts in your head don’t cease to shout,
And they scream so loud, and ever so true,
It is as simple as three little words,
I blame you.
5 Responses for "Is this too offensive?"
no it is apurfect poem for loonys Source(s): xbox live
nope,,its what you feel and your mother is wrong so go ahead
My heart goes out to you. You expressed your pain, frustration and confusion very well. But you won't feel any better about it until you forgive her in your heart. You don't need to tell her. You don't need to do anything differently. You need to understand that perhaps she made a big mistake and unfortunately, there were repercussions. Use the experience to make yourself a better person.Good luck.
Your poem was awesome! Its pretty fantabulous. Haha i got a poetry slam today argh. But yeah just wanna say thats an awesome poem. Maybe ill edit one day for ya when i have time. But who cares i suck at poetry anyways haha. Good luck fellow poet. Source(s): Minky and Mouse
you should be able to express yourself freely, as long as it is the truth, and i believe you are expressing the truth.although, you should never reject a family member if they desire your trust and respect, no matter what, at least for me.
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