Is this story good? Please read … I am only 13 so bare with me.?

Be honest and dont steal it lool :)

The girl in the forest.
By Alexandra Gordon
The cold air whimpered and I could feel the wind beckoning me to my home, but curiosity took over me and I walked towards the trees which danced at the sight of me. Their swaying made a swooshing noise, the rain patting gently on the branches and the stars twinkled like chimes… It was an orchestra. My feet just couldn’t stop themselves and then the next thing I know I was standing in the middle of the forest listening to their beautiful melodies.
I thought it was amazing; the golden moon beaming through the trees, reflected in the rain which poured. It was magical; the environment around me was literally glowing! But then I noticed something… In the distance I could see a girl swaying around to the forest’s music. She was so beautiful, her perfect face: her eyes green like the leaves on the trees, her hair red like the roses surrounding her, her skin, impossibly pale. They were white but in a sort of pretty way which I envied.
The mysterious girl swept her hair from side to side as she moved but then she stopped. Everything went silent as if they had been muted by her still figure. She glared at me in a confused way like I was something she had never seen before. I felt compelled to go back home but her beauty was fascinating me- how is it that a girl can actually be so hypnotic? As she came closer her expression seemed more loving and caring.
She raised her hands and signaled ‘stop’ to the forest around her. Then at that moment the trees becamer very dark and the moon turned a kind of dark purple color which coated the forest in a scary way… The amazing forest which I first saw had transformed itself into something hideous and something that made me feel like running away! And then I turned to the girl…
I shrieked at the sight of her! Her eyes had turned black. Those eyes stared at me whilst I was trying to escape them… Her divine hair, once bright red had changed into a much darker tone like the contrast between a rotten red apple and dried blood. It was messy and spiky! Her perfect white skin had turned a very pale blue. I could see her veins burgeoning as she was growing skinnier! The sight of her made my blood curdle and my heart pound rapidly! I couldn’t move, I was just paralyzed by the sight of her! I wasn’t even sure if she was a ‘she’or an ‘it’.
She placed her hands on my cheeks; they were freezing, as cold as a morning frost. I almost felt pity, her eyes full of sadness and loneliness. But, then her fingers split into two, opening and allowing two sharp, long nails to dig into my face. Blood and tears were streaming down my cheeks and I screamed but she kept on with that blank expression on her face. She was unused to reality. She dug down into my face tearing and ripping my skin until my face was skinless, blood covering her hands which finally released themselves me and then I cried my last cry. I fell to the ground, covered in blood; leaves swam in the crimson puddle, bugs biting my remaining flesh of my body.
My motionless body was then joined by the girl, her hands wrapped around me warm and gentle. She and the forest became the beauty I first saw. Then I realized that the girl wanted to love something, something which she could keep forever. She would never be lonely. My soul now remains here in her forest. My story is how the saying goes: “Looks can be deceiving.”

***** By a 13 year old girl, and is there any competitions i could enter it in?? x Thanks XxX