Is this a good song about a girl I love?

Hey, Em, I have somethin’ to say, but I don’t know how to say it
I’m trying to say I… I mean… You… (Music Stops) Ah, s—!
(Music starts back up)

Sorry ‘bout that, let me restart
Get ready ‘cause I’m gonna try and open my heart
First off, this isn’t the first time I tried to write this song
I kept getting it wrong, (Music stops briefly) so that’s why it’s been taking so long

The first time I saw your smile
That kept me happy for a while
The look I see in your eyes
Is always a pleasant surprise
You’re so cute and so much fun
You’re my moon at night and my shining sun

I have a lot to say
And I wanna say it all today
And I gotta write it down
Before it all goes away

This song is about a girl named Em
My friends say not you but I don’t listen to them
Askin’ you out in a song is not what I want to do
And all I have to say is I… lost my nerve

She’s a Hot Topic girl with not too pale of skin
With dark black hair and a body, oh, so thin
She has a beautiful face and beautiful eyes
But what’s inside is where true beauty lies

I have a lot to say
And I wanna say it all today
And I gotta say it now
Before it all goes away

This song is about a girl named Em
My friends say not you but I don’t listen to them
Askin’ you out in a song is not what I want to do
And all I have to say is I… lost my nerve

(Guitar solo)

You might think this is a stalker song
But you see, that’s where ya got it wrong
‘Cause ya see, I think she likes me too
And all I have to say is I… lost my nerve

(Music slows down. The words “Say It” are repeated by 6 different people)

I have a lot to say
And I wanna say it all today
And I gotta sing it out
Before it all goes away

This song is about a girl named Em
My friends say not you but I don’t listen to them
This song is about a girl named Em
My friends say not you but I don’t listen to them
This song is about a girl named Em
My friends say not you but I don’t listen to them
Askin’ you out in a song is not what I want to do
And all I have to say is I… love you