Im trying to be an author when i grow up what do you think of this so far?

Chapter 1:
You know those stories that make you go bump in the night well what would you do if you found out those stories were real. I warn you the story your about to hear is not for the weak of heart brace yourself. We are Strigopaths and we can control anything. Strigopaths always need to have their emotions in check or else our magic will over flow causing chaos and destruction. Unfortunately, we have enemies called sydiopaths their just like us except gone wrong really wrong. They use their powers to commit an act against Mother Nature… worse than murder to watch it happen is pure agony I would rather die than see it happen.
We live just like normal people except for the police. Some Strigopaths chose to become police to help keep the sydiopaths in line. No offense to any of our law officials but my friends Liza, Kenny, and I (Sapura) do a way better job of taking care of the hundreds of sydiopaths that want to kill us and all the other ones that threaten our kind than they do with just one.
Are you wondering how a sydiopath can kill a strigopath without using any type of weapon? Well shut up I’m getting to it they suck the souls out through our mouths…yeah somewhat gross. Now I am guessing you want to know why they want to kill us well I’m marked, that means were targets of the sydiopaths were their targets because…
1. We killed there leader omraka (which in your language means pinning light we speak niosuka)
2. Being marked means, you are extremely dangerous to their kind
3. Lucky me (not) I have a scent that draws them in
4. Finally, I have been hand chosen since birth to be the one that will save our people from this looming prophecy that I am supposed to have a vision about when I’m “ready.”
Apparently, the leader had two very powerful followers that swear vengeance upon us and they have even more followers. We are never safe staying in one place so we have to fight them as we go but we can never show our faces in Ara city again because one day… We were awakened by a phone call I listened to the persons cold hatred filled voice. “He’s dead, and the police are coming to kill you like now have fun.” it was Nalla the sydiopath who was the powerful follower of oomraka we packed every little thing we owned and ran. By the time we were outside we finally saw the dead the dead body on our porch his soul was sucked out of his skin the body was so pale it was translucent his eyes were a sea of black the work of the sydiopaths. The police pulled up “you killed him!” they shouted at us we had to use our magic to knock them out so we could teleport out of there an into kachelle city.
Therefore, were now outlaws and running from the law even though were really the good guys this is a lot on your shoulders when you’re only sixteen. Luckily, because of our powers, we can charm people into letting us have free room and an accommodation whenever we want also the fact strigopaths are naturally beautiful doesn’t hurt. Its true Liza has long blonde hair eyes the color of jade and pale skin and on her cheeks a slight pink undertone. Liza’s boyfriend and my friend Kenny has messy
deep brown hair eyes as blue as the ocean and skin very lightly tanned. I had jet-black hair skin lightly tanned an eyes a green so deep they were the color of emeralds. Now that you are up to speed on what has happened so far were moving on to the next chapter in my life.
Chapter 2:
I sat there on the ground thinking of what to do next what our plan would be. Soon Kenny chimed in.
“Honestly this is stupid why we are waiting for them to attack us we need to strike first!”
“Kenny you don’t always need to be so rash! Think about it how can we attack when one we have no idea of their whereabouts. Two they would probably just kill us if we came rushing to battle without a plan. Three we don’t know who to trust because their always controlling somebody, and four they keep sending us fights, dead people at our door, and if that wasn’t bad enough we have no idea whose behind all the murders,” Liza said getting irritated on Kenny’s rash behavior.
“Everyone shut up now! None of this arguing is helping to get our names cleared or helping me prepare for the prophecy.” We sat there and thought about that some more until Liza finally said something.
“Why don’t you use your powers Sapura to infiltrate Nallas mind we could all take turns doing that while someone else takes down what we saw,” said Liza.
“Good idea we’ll start that tomorrow but right now let’s sleep whose going to do the first shift for sydiopath watch?” I said. No one answered so I volunteered for it while Kenny and Liza went to bed.