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Please edit it and don't say things like "you need grammar work." Say things like, "Capitol the 'C' in Cats are my favorite animal." I am only writing a mininum of 26 pgs, and a max of 58, so sorry if some things are rushed. I will have the next page of the story up soon. I have not edited this yet so it is probably not the best work, plus I have only practiced writing about 3 years ago so it is probably not like you proffesional writers. Please be honest in your opinion!

with a dragon! I had never seen a dragon before, although most wizards have for they are owned by a lot of wizards. The dragon was red and had black strips along its spine. There were spikes too along its spine that were the same color as its skin, red, and probably was its skin. It also had two straight horns on its head and a tail with a triangle at the end of it like the devil’s tail. It was the fiercest dragon I had ever seen, fighting with the wizards and it almost beat them if the wizards didn’t put a spell on its chain, then it would’ve been easy for him to break the chain and escape, but too bad for him, they did, and when he tried to escape, he was burned badly on the neck where the chains were tied. He started groaning and whimpering.

I went out of the bars right after the guards had left, although noisily for very rarely to tree elves become spies, they are horrible at sneaking. A guard caught site of me and if I hadn’t gone behind a trash can, I probably would be dead by now because he would probably think that I was a thief. I hurried over to the dragon and wanted to give him some food, he was bony and hungry. I looked in my pocket to find some bread crumbs. I found about ten pieces for a snack the day before when out of nowhere came a wizard and hand cuffed me to take me back to their jail. I never realized how big dragons were. His head was as big as my body, although my body wasn’t that big. He wouldn’t care for a little bit of crumbs, even my whole package would be a little snack for him. I put some bread crumbs in my hand and held it out. He came over, sniffed my hand, too weak to fight me, and ate all of it. He seemed to be enjoying it much, so I named him Daerb. That is the Elfish word for Bread, since he enjoyed my bread crumbs, I will name him Daerb.

He put down his neck like he wanted me to get on him. He was a high way up, and I really didn’t feel like getting on a dragon that I had never seen before that was a wizard dragon and could eat me any second. I knew that he could fly fast though so I decided to climb up; it was a risk I was willing to take to get back