I am going to add more to the beginning don't worry- I think it is for older teens (15 and up) and young s.

Holly Dallas tossed and turned in bed. Outside was the “pitter patter” of the rain, the wind had an agonizing swoop to it. Without warning, lightning cracked the sky with a explosion and thunder rumbled through the valleys. Holly turned on her light it was no use– She would never get to asleep. She stared outside her window just to see the New Mexico desert. Another flash of lightning pounded hear the window, which made Holly jump back, Holly’s whole family spoke Spanish at home, so Holly followed. People might of described Holly as: humorous, quiet and creative. She twirled her black dreadlocks of hair and felt her baby smooth, tan skin. Holly was beginning to feel quite thirsty and climbed down the unstable ladder that lead up to her room and crept down stairs.
Mean while back in snowed-down Boston, Massachusetts, Aria Prince was having the exact opposite problem. It was mid-night there and Aria had such a problem trying to stop watching the beautiful, glorious snow that fell down from high. “How could anyone not want to watch this?” Aria said dreamily. She put her hand out, a cold, soft snow trickled on it. “Ah”. Even though Aria loved the cold, she was getting a tad chilly and needed her fuzzy, lilac blanket which was in her baby sister- Laney’s room, downstairs. Aria had delicate blond hair and the rosiest cheeks, with penetrating emerald green eyes. A beauty. Aria was dramatic, dreamy, and loved the spotlight! She opened the door from her bedroom carefully and headed to Laney’s room, which she loved dearly.
Holly was just downstairs when a red vivid, black at white truck pulled into the driveway. “Probably just Charlotte coming back with her boyfriend and her daughter- Sydney” Holly said thinking nothing of it and rolling her eyes, when in the kitchen she turned on the tap- nothing, next Holly tried to switch on the lights- nothing. Then the phone rang three times. “This is just like one of those scary movies” said Holly aloud. Holly’s walk broke into a run as the silence in her house fell in. Again something made her stop by the door again. She cracked it up a bit. Coming out of the red and white truck came six, dangerous, tough looking guys armed with illegal weapons and explosives, she leaned in closer to hear what they were saying
“Look rob the house, blow it up, take all the money and get out- If any s come- shoot’ em, kids- kidnap them- those er things are dangerous, boys” A gruff voice said. Holly gasped. He looked in her direction. Holly ran to the porch and hid in the dirty laundry basket, barely breathing a word.
Back in Boston, Aria had slowly pulled the blanket away from Laney and hushed her back to sleep. Laney’s face was so peaceful. Aria looked outside the window, clutching her blanket. As Aria looked more closely she saw a motorcycle in the yard, she didn’t recognize and outside smoking and drinking were three teenagers, none of whom she had seen before. She quietly opened the window making sure they didn’t hear her. The youngest said
“Look, we’ve been stalking these people for weeks now, the plan is- kill the s, injure the elderly woman, choke the baby, kidnap the kids and any teenager’s leave them.”
Aria felt a tear trickle down her cheek. They had been stalking her and her family. “No! I can’t let this is happen!” Aria cried, choking herself up. All of her memories were becoming as precious as a fairy’s eyelash. With no thought Aria grabbed Laney and a snow globe she had and ran as fast as she could to a closet, tears streaking down her face as she rocked Laney.

Question: I am not sure how they are related yet- maybe they both get kidnapped to the same place and live through the tortures while trying to escape???

I need: Editing,Constructive Criticism, Compliments, Suggestions Anything!