How corny does this sound?

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26 Mar

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I was going to send this girl that I like some flowers and I just thought this up to go on the card. Honest opinions from mature women in there 20's would be great.. I know she likes me but it this too cheesy?

The beauty of the flower
cannot compare
to the glow of your skin
and the shine of your hair
but most of all it cannot content
with having (Girls name) as my beautiful friend

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Vanessa Hudgens March 26th, 2010 at 2:49 am 1
it sounds nice, however I'm pretty sure you mean to use "contend" instead of content
taylor lautner March 26th, 2010 at 2:49 am 2
I love it and I'm 23. It's really sweet. And it does not sound cheesy but you might want to change the ending…"beautiful friend" to something that will let her know you are into her and want to be more than just friends.
lady gaga March 26th, 2010 at 2:49 am 3
I like it and I think she might to, but you put at the end "beautiful friend". When I read this it sounded like you just wanted to be friends and nothing more. good luck

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