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Poem for my girlfriend, opinions please? ANYONE ?

Hello, This is a poem for my girlfriend and it is the first ever poem i have written and it may be shockingly bad, but thats wy im here. Could you please tell me what you think and what i could improve about it.

Opinions would be greatly appreciated, Thank you

Title:
My Heart Belongs to you

Poem:
…with your beauty, where do I begin?
You are the most beautiful thing that I’ve ever seen,
Your bright glowing eyes, like stars fallen from the sky,
Your perfect soft skin, when I snuggle up to you, It’s the cuddliest thing,
Your adorable tiny nose and soft silk hair, All the other girls say “it’s not fair”,
I don’t know how you are so beautiful,
You’ve caught my heart,
But I’ve known all of this right from the start,
Since the first time I laid my eyes on you,
Now were together my dreams have come true,
You’re the love of my life,
And some day, I want to make you my wife,

Jasmine you are my everything,
And for you I would do or give anything,
And if anyone said anything different I would have to disagree,

I’d give you my last breath just to see you breathe,
I’d give my last drop of blood to keep you alive,
I would jump in front of a bullet for you to survive,
You are what makes my word turn round,
And I hate to see you frown,

You and me, we are meant to be,
And I know sometimes we get angry and we disagree,
But you have to know that that isn’t the real me,
Even though we argue and fight,
You’re the only one I’d want by my side,
And sometimes when things get tough,

I feel that I am not enough,
And you do deserve so much more,
But you are the one that I adore,
So I am grateful to have your heart,
I would hate for us ever to be apart,
You are so special to me,
This is the way things are meant to be,
Two hearts together, for eternity <3

Thanks