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26 Mar
Help Me Pick Between These Two Descriptions?
The kind of girl you would see and think she is pretty, or cute, or a guy would hit on. Nothing particularly special, but definitely something to look at.
2. A girl with a face that has a delicately pointing, pixie chin, other a wide heart. Slightly bronzed skinned, with deep brown hair that fell straight to her mid-back. Deep, reflective, wide brown eyes.
Small, 5"2, seventeen years old, and adorable, cute, beautiful.
Again, not a shocking beauty or a supermodel, just cute.
Oh, and give me names!
She is supposed to be sweet.
She rambles on about how she can see the future, buildings burning and crashing and people dying. She feels it, first class.
But they call her crazy, and she gets put into a mental hospital. The person she shares a room with a girl who seems normal, talking about being about to control electricity without even trying. But if she concentrates, she can turn the power off in the entire hospital.
The main character meets a boy named Ash, who she likes immediately. He is handsome, with chocolate brown hair and emerald green eyes.
But as they come closer together, Ash seems to be more trouble than hes worth. Talking about not being able to control what he does at some points, his body doing things on its own.
She ignores that flaw, because she likes him, and shes crazy, too. Or so they tell her.
But as everything seems to fit together, that all of them all fit together, Ash's outbursts become stronger, and every fit of rage strikes the main character (The girl you are naming.)
It turns into a problem, and her and her roomie are on a mission to help Ash. They figure that they aren't crazy – their powers are very much real, and Ash can learn to control this.
The main character has a vision of Ash, thanking her. He is normal, they are together, in a meadow, hugging. He is talking about how he can't believe that his poltergeist is gone.
And she did it.
Determined to make this fantasy a reality, they tumble over many obsticles as they escape from the hospital and pick up some unlikely friends along the way.
6 Responses for "Help Me Pick Between These Two Descriptions?"
Best Answer – Chosen by Voters The descriptios remind me of Twilight; kind of over-the-top descriptive. You should really only take 1-2 sentences to describe your character.
1-Dawn because it fits a color radiant like her hairOption 2 for #1- Ivy- because she could be toxic, exoticOption 3 for #1- RavenOption 4 for #1- Mercedees#2-Clair sounds sweet but powerfulOption #2 LillyOption #3 HannahOption #4 Willow
girl #1her name is…(first,last)zoe jamesoravery hollensounds like a great story.i hope you get it published so i can read it!
1. Emmaline2. Trista
Twilight!
I choose this descrip:2. A girl with a face that has a delicately pointing, pixie chin, other a wide heart. Slightly bronzed skinned, with deep brown hair that fell straight to her mid-back. Deep, reflective, wide brown eyes. Small, 5"2, seventeen years old, and adorable, cute, beautiful. Again, not a shocking beauty or a supermodel, just cute. I think she sounds like a Sonya… but here are a few other names:TessaMiaKyraLeahNadiaBelleIrisTeaganSerenaKaiBrielle (nn Bri)Good luck! Sounds like an interesting book! Source(s): Future novelist
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