Eh…. I'm still working on this…. rate/hate?
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15
Mar
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Eh…. I'm still working on this…. rate/hate?
You say you love me, and hate me in the same breath,
And as that air escaped your mouth, the pain left
Leapt up from the page and into my heart
Two sides to this story and in a prism we’re apart
Light reflecting off into multisided rainbows
Searching in the sky we’re finding the same gold
It’s the same old, same old, flames being relit
The same pain that sin emits, ink pens piece it
Together the truth I’m seeking, red light blinking
So my life’s on stop and I’m in bed I’m bleeding
But I’ve made my bed so I’m going to sleep in it
My hearts like an acapella there’s not a beat in it
Only thing in this that told the truth was time
And how my life showed the proof was lies
It’s the light that’s always created the negatives
In darkness, the lights been the one confessing it
Using carefully worded lines as sedatives
While I lie and say burned in lies are decorative
All these girls want are sex and sh*t
Ever wonder why good guys necks are slit?
Be intelligent, put two and two together
I had a choice between love but I choose it never
It’s truth, hidden in the skin beauty lies underneath
But as a surface, we believe we won’t find no other needs
4 Responses for "Eh…. I'm still working on this…. rate/hate?"
I don't think there's enough syllables in "And as that air escaped your mouth, the pain left" Add something in between the pain [add here] left. Or put an adjective before pain. Also I'd recommend not using the same word to rhyme. But very good.
Deep man, deep!
"You say you love me, and hate me in the same breath, And as that air escaped your mouth, the pain left""My hearts like an acapella there’s not a beat in it"this is so unbelievably good.damnit. i am unfathomably envious of your extraordinary ability to express your thoughts.
sounds more like a love song than rap, my man.
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