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Smeyer probably prefers her men to be so pale white that they look like their sick. yuck. so she trieds to force her concept of beauty on to others. Think about her vampires marble lips, freakish pale skin and circle like bruises under there eyes if anyone were to look like this in real life most normal people be disgusted.Personally i have no problem with ivory-skinned guys but when it comes down to the point when there bone white meaning whiter than white I'm automatically turned off. Meyer was just probably tired of society's concept of beauty; Tall, Dark(Tan skin) and handsome so she created a world where pale people were much beautiful than olive-skinned people.