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Does my poem make sense,is it good?

Please tell me if my poem makes sense or if it's good. :)

Late at night when no one else is hearing,
When the villains,the thief's are all asleep,
Creeping soundlessly along the grass,
leaving a trail of shame behind.
At the end of your path he waits,
your soul he requires,
your love he desires.
dazzled by his beauty,forgetting all
nothing can stop you from moving on.
feeling the earth pulsing underneath your feet,
sensing the bats eyes on you as if they can see.
The blood in your neck sliders like a snake.
You can hear your heart beating,
your veins desiring for more.
At the end he lays teeth bare on your skin
as he bites everything is forgotten,
as the blood drips your memory fades,
as he backs away you close your eyes and sink into darkness.