2 Responses for "Do you like this poem?"

1. justin bieber March 14th, 2010 at 4:41 am 1

   I like this poem a lot!!! Interesting subject. I like that the bottle almost represents the relationship. The only thing I would personally change (keep in mind that I haven't been writing very long) is add some appropriate punctuation.Want to check out my poem too? If you want =)

2. lady gaga March 14th, 2010 at 4:41 am 2

   yes but some changes again to help you if you likeThe bottle lies shattered on the floorI am there to pick up the piecesMy heart is Beaten fastSame with my skin happenedYou stumble out the doorI do not know what to doYour the one thing i leftSo therefore i care about youEvery night is the same nightWe are both weakeningYou the mostI am not suredid i find this little strengthI do not believe in GodNo matter if i did nowWould he put this to an end?Im shakingI don't know what you'll do nextMaybe mark me again?The bottle lies shattered on the floorI pick up the pieces once moreThis time im walking out to the doorgood luck Source(s): um ghost the great