Thank you. I'm open to any suggestions. Please leave a detailed answer critiquing each character if possible. Do my characters seem well-developed?

Parker Marie McClure – She is a total tomboy, loves to play video games, go on the computer, hang out with friends. She mostly wears skinny jeans and T-shirts, converse shoes and flats. She sometimes wears tank tops too. She is very opinionated, open minded, charismatic, has a good sense of humor, sarcastic, self conscious, intelligent, lazy and charming. She is also clumsy. Her father walked out on her family when she was younger but she tries not to let it affect her. Her home life is pretty good, she is middle class. She has a comeback for everything. When she grows up she wants to be a video game developer. Favorite type of music: country. She never usually pampers herself and her nails are always unpainted and her fingers nails are dirty. She plays volleyball and is very good at it. She enjoys singing in the shower (not well.) Loves: Walks on the beach. Hates: Arrogant people.
Hair: Light brown, down to her shoulders, stick straight
Eyes: Green
Skin: Caramel colored, healthy glow
Body type: Thin, average height.
Favorite color: Blue.
Age: 17

John Richard Pacetti – Tough guy, or at least tries to be tough, lazy, respects woman, nervous around girls, enthusiastic, honest, mature, lucky, negligent, concerned about the people around him, cautious, romantic, courageous, confused about life, athletic, doesn't care about what other people think about him, intelligent and is a downer. He usually wears sports jerseys, band-shirts, worn out jeans, sweat pants, sneakers or flip flops and his hair is usually messy, tousled and never styled – worn short. Home life: His parents are divorced but both are wealthy. He has two siblings: Joanne and Cooper. The relationship with them both is fine but they lost touch over the years. He covers his mouth when he eats afraid he'll get spit over another person. When he grows up he wants to be a teacher and join the army. He enjoys shopping for people. Loves: Football. Hates: Ignorant people.
Favorite type of music: rock.
Hair: Short, light brown, straight
Eyes: Hazel
Skin: Olive
Body type: Muscular and tall
Favorite color: Green.
Age: 17

Griffin George Smith – Cowardly, religious, up-tight, worries about his studies, kind, a bit obsessive at times, adventurous, generous, nosy, musical, tough guy, goes crazy over girls, romantic, player, insensitive, humanitarian, obnoxious, very OCD, intelligent, paranoid about little things and worries about what other people think about him. He loves to treat girls with respect. He usually is wearing leather, V-Neck T-Shirts, ripped jeans that are usually worn out, sandals or dress shoes and his hair is messy but always is styled with gel. His parents are both together. They aren't very rich because of the school bills. He is an only child but has a pet lizard at home named Lily. He fiddles with his ear when he's with a girl he likes. When he grows up he wants to play guitar in a band. Favorite type of music: heavy metal. Loves: Music. Hates: Rude people.
Hair: Black and curly, tousled – average length
Eyes: Olive green
Skin: Pale
Body type: Lanky
Favorite color: Brown.
Age: 16

Claire Elizabeth Morrison – Girly, sexual, romantic, intelligent, proactive, studious, respectful, sophisticated, down to earth, flirtatious, sensitive, generous, loves music, adventurous, mischievous, rebellious, opinionated, independent, funny, cares about what others thing of her, classy, poetic, self-conscious, over-emotional, judges people by their looks and the clothes they wear, innocent, blunt, aloof, determined, poised, is extremely OCD and is as well very ambitious. She usually wears pink, purple, blue, gray and white. She wears sweaters, tank tops and snug T-Shirts usually, always brand name, a purse or clutch of some sort, jeans, skirts, dresses, heels, flats and flip flops; she will never wear sneakers, either! Her parents are together and she has a younger brother named Henry who is eight. Their relationship is full of banter but of course they do love each other! Good, strong relationship with her parents, although they don't trust her since she is so pretty (they think she will get into bad things although she is, as said above, extremely innocent!) She twirls her hair when she likes a guy and snorts when she laughs. When he grows up she wants to be a cosmetologist. Loves: Make up. Hates: People who are mean. Favorite type of music: pop.
Hair: Blonde, wavy and long
Eyes: Turquoise blue
Skin: Porcelain – pale
Body type: Curvaceous and short.
Favorite color: Pink.
Age: 17
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