beauty healthy happy
14 Mar
Are these nice lyrics?
The girl was poppin
Locking da fellas down
Wit da brown skin
Complexion so beautiful now
She was da sme color as me
We saw in da same pod
Two peas
And I
Was thinkin hopefully
that we could be together forever
Infinity
Cause she
Had da hips and da thighs
The healthy booty dat gives guys bulgy eyes
But she als had an intelligent mind
Makin a combo that was such a hard find
She was a beast in math
She was so good all she sould do was laugh in class
And I keep thinkin she like me
But i'm too scared by the king's decree
Too afraid to fail
Rejection Devestation
So much it makes me pale
And blush
Tryin not to fuss
But I wish this girl was mine
I would dedicate every rhyme
To the most beautiful dime
The one with unparrelled sheen
So much she seems to shine and gleam
chorus
Brown Skin lady got me on lockdown
Brown skin finest girl in da town X2
and the world
gotta be my girl
But yo, couldn't even ask for her phone number
So many times I tried but its a silly blunder
So now I must gather my insides
I must succed
Take da lead
Change da tide
Turn over a new leaf
One without the heartache and beef
One where my actions match my name
And Im not walkin round actin lame
My name is an antonym
not actuality in reality
But I guess on da mic Im kool
Cookin em , bakin em like crim de la crim
And I wonder if these skills will land me this woman
Brown Skin Lady wit da bam and Boom and
The things that make my teenage mind reel wit fantasies
Credit da top and da bottom plus the thins unseen
Makin me wish for da x-rays
To come her way
tessir
Or maybe we could do it old fasioned
Take her home for da movies and everything gets unfastened
She make wanna say "who cares bout abstinence"
Make me do dumb stuff that don't make sense
And if she ever hears dis song
She'll have to smile and sing along
6 Responses for "Are these nice lyrics?"
u gotta good theme. u need to shorten the verses and lengthen da chorus. fix the beat. u on the rite track though
I agree with Taylor. You need to lengthen the chorus and trim down the verses. A few changes and the right beat, this could be seriously good.
Nah you cud learn alot from my nukka big Gucci & Soulja Boy, Ya Dig!
Hell no bump some Gucci
no,it sucks
its not that bad 7/10 keep it up
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