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Are these good names for my characters? description?
Evela (nickname Eve) – Shy, timid. long blonde hair, greyish-blue eyes. main character, age 16, her Dad owns a chain of popular restraunts, her mum died when she was 10. I need a second name for her any ideas???
Corrina Brooks (nickname Corrie) – Evelas best friend, loud, over excited, red hair,green eyes,pale skin,age 16, totaly different lifestyle from Evela.
Tyler Wesly (nickname Ty) – Evelas boyfriend, love intrest of corrina, dark brown hair/eyes,tanned,muscley,age 18, hiding a big secret, a joker, is always smiling a big cheesy grin, not a very serious person.
Minerva Moore (nickname Minnie) – Evelas Dads maid, Evelas other best friend, dark skin (not really dark),brown hair,hazel eyes, like a sister to Evela, Mum and Dad both past away when she was 8, age 22, caring, intelligent.
Sentagio Lamia(means vampire) (nickname Senta) – Moves in next door to Corrina, Corrina uses him to make Tyler jelous, He uses Corrina to make Evela jelous (he is drawn to her in a weird way, jet black hair,white skin,eyes change colour with different imotions, evil but has a good heart, his brother died in a fire.
Owen Moore – Minervas long lost brother, Was adopted when he was younger, Looks just like
Minervas Dad, dirty bonde hair hazel eyes, come to find Minerva, gets a job in Evelas Dads restraunt.
Blair Lamia(nickname Blaze because he is always warm) – Sentagios brother who isn't really dead,Falls in love with Evela, jet black hair, pale skin,yellowy-brown eyes,age 18,doesn't know his brother is in town when he moves in.
4 Responses for "are these good names for my characters? description?"
I personally think they all work quite well. All original kind of names you don't see often in a book and i like the descriptions of them too, sounds like something i could read.Good luck
Hey Abby, I love Blaze ! Evela's surname could be Mcdonald x Heehee
All I can say is, don't give out so many nicknames. It gets veerrry confusing.other than that, seems good. i like how you've kept away from mainstream names
please do the world a favour and don't write another vampire noveljust leave the vampires alone and don't try and cash in on the twilight fadyour characters are fine but try and leave out the vampire themeas far as the names go, i would try and be more originalyou have chosen names that reflect the characters immediate personalitytry giving them names that show their hidden emotions or be ironic by giving the timid characters more exciting names.this will give your novel more of a surprise element and allow for more dynamic character development
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