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15 Mar
A Crush: Poem about my crush?
I know this is just another generic love poem
But its from the bottom of my own heart
I prayed to God that today would be the day our relationship would start
I made a fool out of myself
And I'd like to apologize, in the most sincerest way
You've got me head over heels and my aching mind is now astray
This may be infatuation, but I know that there is something there
From the minute I laid eyes on you, I never had a doubt, not at all
Your beauty and your elegance left me nothing but in thrall
Day in and day out, always thinking about you
I've tried to approach you, but only once before
I was terrified that you would shut and close your door
There are thousands of words that could describe how you are so perfect
Your pretty smile warms me like the beach's summer set
Every time I gaze at you and you look at me right back, I feel my shaking hands start to sweat
Every minute of school I hope that I can find you just alone
By now you probably think this is just obsessive love
I would disagree with you because your personality fits me like a glove
Why do I have these troubles when I want to approach you and tell you how I feel
I day dream about holding you in my arms and feeling your soft skin
And on my face, both mine and yours, would be the most brilliant grin
Very soon I will overcome my shyness
But you're not just a normal person
That's why at home I'll be rehearsin'
Perhaps tomorrow Thursday, I will ask you out for Valentines Day
If you say yes, my heart will skip a beat
I'll take you to the movies, and it will be my treat
4 Responses for "A Crush: Poem about my crush?"
Aw, you make me want to cry! I don't know how you do it, but you capture such flawless emotions in the pieces you write. Although this is only the second piece I've seen of yours, I can honestly say that I'm extremely impressed. I only realized towards the end of the poem that it rhymed, which gave it that extra boost. I'm not sure why, but I only like poems that rhyme when they are about love. Haha, I guess I'm just weird, but this is so cute.In my last question, you spoke of a girl who I assume is the one that this piece is about. If I'm correct, I think you should give it to her. I think the first answerer's idea is great and I know I would love it, too. Girls like a guy who writes poetry, but they love a guy who writes poetry well. Give it to her, what do you really have to lose? I know I may sound hypocritical from my last question, but I heard somewhere that love is all about taking risks. It's one of my favorite quotes and I try to live by it. Why don't you take it for a swing?Again, wonderful piece. Keep writing because I love the way you write. <3 Source(s): You need to give yourself more credit. You say it's a simple poem, but this certainly isn't simple to me. It's amazing. I hope you feel better, though.
Once again, very nice
wow this is really sweet and good!
Wow, very nice…you should lay it on her desk or whatever and give it to her, signed as her secret admirer.Leave in the part about Valentine's day and then ask her out, I know I would love that if I were her…good luck, you can do it!!Also, I hate to beg but I would really like to have best answer, I'm trying to be a top contributor((:
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